Tuesday, April 11, 2006

ठहरी सी जिन्दगी

3 Comments:

At 2:29 AM, Blogger Synchronicity Diva said...

Zindagi tumhari hai,
chalti hai tumhare kahne pe,
wo sochti hai, tum thahar gaye ho,
tum sochte ho who thahar gayi hai.

Baat karo ek doosre se
aur chalo us taraf
jahan dil chahe.

 
At 2:36 AM, Blogger Vikas Pundreek said...

like this "wo sochti hai, tum thahar gaye ho, tum sochte ho who thahar gayi hai."

 
At 4:03 AM, Blogger Synchronicity Diva said...

thats nice. I am happy you liked them :)

btw, see this modified thing:

Baat karo ek doosre se
aur chalo us taraf
jahan dil chahe ("chale" is better).

 

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